
Re: Newsletter
I know I'm not an editor or anything like that but I do agree with Veterinarian, I like to read about newer achievements and such and it does seem kind of messy, not meaning to be mean/rude.Veterinarian wrote:Hey there!mlloftus wrote:..![]()
Just informing you guys (as the previous writer of the racing newsletter ) that sticking to the format (not the old ones) is a must! It is nice to see changes every once in a while but the only change I see here is the fact that the whole newsletter is not organised.
Apart from that many things are missing. Apart from whole change of the format which I am against, since from what I can see the disciplines have not been covered appropriately, important sections of the newsletter like rising stars (you are only featuring horses btw ) competitions and even some world records are missing.
I understand that competitions are missing but rising stars and even world records?
Players depend on the newsletter to receive new information. That new information is not reading about horses that have already been reviewed in the newsletter before, do not get me wrong here it is about that (if the horse has made a new achievemen) but it is also for seeing what the new competition is (rising stars) as well as how the goals are changing (world records)
The racing newsletter, the most important and popular newsletter is a place where breeders get praised for their hard work, and generally spread their names, and the fact that important things are missing is a huge discouragement to the players who have worked so hard.
The newsletter is not a place for only the top players to get their names spread even more it is a place for other players to get some encouragement and praise that is why the rising stars section exists in the first place.
Interviews and such are only an addition to the original newsletter (think of it as a surprise) which means that the interview should not practically be the whole newsletter!
Crunchy is the best, take the time to search for information. I understand that it is a bit tiring but this is something that you agreed to. Do not search fir the easy way around things (by not taking the time to go through the competition results to see the rising stars or huge competitions that have taken place and searching for world records)
Also there us a specific date that the readers expect to see the newsletter!

Re: Newsletter
It is nice to see that players agree with mePeacefulOreo wrote:I know I'm not an editor or anything like that but I do agree with Veterinarian, I like to read about newer achievements and such and it does seem kind of messy, not meaning to be mean/rude.Veterinarian wrote: Hey there!![]()
Just informing you guys (as the previous writer of the racing newsletter ) that sticking to the format (not the old ones) is a must! It is nice to see changes every once in a while but the only change I see here is the fact that the whole newsletter is not organised.
Apart from that many things are missing. Apart from whole change of the format which I am against, since from what I can see the disciplines have not been covered appropriately, important sections of the newsletter like rising stars (you are only featuring horses btw ) competitions and even some world records are missing.
I understand that competitions are missing but rising stars and even world records?
Players depend on the newsletter to receive new information. That new information is not reading about horses that have already been reviewed in the newsletter before, do not get me wrong here it is about that (if the horse has made a new achievemen) but it is also for seeing what the new competition is (rising stars) as well as how the goals are changing (world records)
The racing newsletter, the most important and popular newsletter is a place where breeders get praised for their hard work, and generally spread their names, and the fact that important things are missing is a huge discouragement to the players who have worked so hard.
The newsletter is not a place for only the top players to get their names spread even more it is a place for other players to get some encouragement and praise that is why the rising stars section exists in the first place.
Interviews and such are only an addition to the original newsletter (think of it as a surprise) which means that the interview should not practically be the whole newsletter!
Crunchy is the best, take the time to search for information. I understand that it is a bit tiring but this is something that you agreed to. Do not search fir the easy way around things (by not taking the time to go through the competition results to see the rising stars or huge competitions that have taken place and searching for world records)
Also there us a specific date that the readers expect to see the newsletter!

I thought I was getting a bit worked up about this lol

Re: Newsletter
If Crunchy is the best is the permanent writer and I cannot write the racing newlseter again I would very much like to help with getting it appropriately done by the end of this month :3mlloftus wrote:I completely agree, the whole newsletter was very confusing to read. It IS time a bit time consuming, but you ARE getting paid. Like Vet said, it is a must that you put all the information in the newsletter.Veterinarian wrote: Hey there!![]()
Just informing you guys (as the previous writer of the racing newsletter ) that sticking to the format (not the old ones) is a must! It is nice to see changes every once in a while but the only change I see here is the fact that the whole newsletter is not organised.
If Crunchy you are not sure about continuing to write the newsletter I would be very much like to take the position back XD

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Oh...
I'm sorry you didn't like it, I only had 2 days to complete it and I am very busy!
I was super excited about this newsletter (Because I have never written one before) , but it seems that everyone else was discouraged so if Veterinarian really wants the job she can have it.
I hope you guys are happier with this change. I'm sorry for the discouragement I have caused.
Veterinarian you can have the job I don't want anyone else upset about my bad work
I'm sorry you didn't like it, I only had 2 days to complete it and I am very busy!
I was super excited about this newsletter (Because I have never written one before) , but it seems that everyone else was discouraged so if Veterinarian really wants the job she can have it.
I hope you guys are happier with this change. I'm sorry for the discouragement I have caused.
Veterinarian you can have the job I don't want anyone else upset about my bad work


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No one said you did a bad work!CRUNCHY IS THE BEST wrote:Oh...
I'm sorry you didn't like it, I only had 2 days to complete it and I am very busy!
I was super excited about this newsletter (Because I have never written one before) , but it seems that everyone else was discouraged so if Veterinarian really wants the job she can have it.
I hope you guys are happier with this change. I'm sorry for the discouragement I have caused.
Veterinarian you can have the job I don't want anyone else upset about my bad work
It is just not what we were all expecting XD
I loved the interview and it was nice of you to do one, tbh I have not done an interview in like forever XD
Writing a newsletter is a really time consuming thing! We can all understand that

I would looove to write the newsletter again but I am ok if you want to write it :3
Of course we will all understand if you do not have the time to do it XD before you answer if you want to
continue writing the newsletter take the time to see if you have the time to actually do it ^^

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What are some things I could change to make it better?Veterinarian wrote:I write one a month right?
I will add them into the newsletter for this month and the one for next month will be done right!


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Tbh the whole newsletter needs to be rewritten. Try to stick to what mlloftus has told youCRUNCHY IS THE BEST wrote:What are some things I could change to make it better?Veterinarian wrote:I write one a month right?
I will add them to the newsletter for this month and the one for next month will be done right!

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Re: Newsletter
You know what, if the whole thing needs to be re-written, then you can have the job.
I think it's boring to have the same things on the newsletter over and over again.
Not to be rude.
I think it's boring to have the same things on the newsletter over and over again.
Not to be rude.

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You are not being rude lolCRUNCHY IS THE BEST wrote:You know what, if the whole thing needs to be re-written, then you can have the job.
I think it's boring to have the same things in the newsletter over and over again.
Not to be rude.
It is your opinion!
Keep in mind that the format has nothing to do with the content of the newsletter. The format is to help you keep things neat and organized XD
Would you mind editing the newsletter and only adding a few dots there? Or you can edit the newsletter and write part 1 'interview' and that part 2 will be coming soon (be sure to delete anything that is not related to Bitapetrone's interview )
Or I can include your interview in the newsletter

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Re: Newsletter
Please just include my interview in the newsletter!
I tried really hard on it that's all!
I guess i'm not getting paid am I?

I tried really hard on it that's all!

I guess i'm not getting paid am I?
